New technologies for May Challenge

Your face on my computer,
Smiling, talking or walking,
Pain of distance has shrunk further,
The world is really shrinking.

How I longed to see you,
Just ached to be right with you!
Now, just a message for you,
And I am talking with you.

Sharmishtha basu
6.5.11

Form Rispetto ~ A Rispetto an Italian form which is a complete poem of two rhyming quatrains abab ccdd. Syllable count is 8 per line

May Challenge by Golden Hair Bear:
May 6th: John Deere produces the first steel plow. Write a poem about new technology. (1833)

7 thoughts on “New technologies for May Challenge

  1. an effective poem. I can relate to it. It reminds me of the time when I was in the Brahma Kumaris; I used to write poems like this. They open outward generously to the world like flowers

  2. Pingback: May 6th: New Technology Responses « Verse in a Nutshell

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